Lk at me,
The only "ME"
I have to show.

Lk at this depressed,
Little child, crying
And dying every day of his live...

Lk at the soul, burning,
Sleeping and dreaming
The endless dream of creation.

Lk at this girl, learning such many things
Every day, every second..
I learnd to love...but I never learnd to life..
To life..with the death around me,
The "ME" I learnd to hate...

Lk at me,
The only "ME"
I have to show.

Lk at the perfect tears
Running down..droping on earth,
The bld..softly bleeding.

And only one time
I hope you will lk
Deeply inside.

Lk at myself, laughing about such many things
I can't change, can't do anything angainst.
He will die..and I will cry
And the "ME" inside, you'll never see,
Will life with it.

Please..
Lk at me,
The only ME
I can't show.

okay..

die SMileys nehmen den gesamteindruck des gedichtet etwas auseinander..
und ziehen es etwas ins lächerliche.

ihch sollte das wieder ändern, dass bei jedem doppel O diesr smiley kommt xD


sonst is das gedicht leicht gewöhnungsbedürftig.. dennnoch schön..
etwas traurig und depressiv.. aber schön ^^